coordinator angel

Firstly, the top part of the wings is too stiff, because compared to the whole soft looking wings, it seems out of place. Furthermore, I think the pink wasn't the best choice of color for the feathers on the wings on the edge. The pink stands out, which becomes out of place. Secondly, I think the boobs should be more round in my opinion because it seems to be too pointy for its overall look. Lastly, I think the light on the right leg is too hard (too bright), abnormally bright compared the the light shined on the hair and face. As mentioned before about the lighting, I think that was the biggest problem out of it. To make sure where exactly your light source is coming. However, the art overall is refined, beautiful, and captivating.